Why would I want to revise perfection? You did a wonderful job and I’m extremely pleased and grateful! You are clearly a skilled writer and I truly appreciate your attention to the details I shared and crafty ways in which you integrated them through the speech. I’m also loving the little poem you developed –- so perfect!! I’ve gone from dreading this event to anticipating this moment. Thank you for crafting a speech that will truly be a gift to my sister and her future husband! All my thanks!