I have had my first read, I COULDN’T BE MORE PLEASED! One of my fears with people editing my work (mostly magazine editors) are those who make change for the sake of change, only to fit their styling and tastes. I caught no whiff of you doing that, or, if you did, our nuances are so similarly aligned that it certainly didn’t matter. You really displayed an incredible understanding of my story and characters, and your touch to all was precise and powerful. Every single change you made was fantastic, especially those small, subtle ones that helped the story in massive ways. Love what you did to Zoey. You got all the spunk out of her that was needed. There really is way too much for me to comment on. There were moments of out-loud laughter. I really liked how you made sense of a few things in the story that didn’t make full sense from my writing. Some incredibly classic lines. BRAVO!